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What Do You Do? by ~mikey-madness:iconmikey-madness:

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What do you do when you love someone
But they don't believe a word you say
What do you do when you want someone
But they simply turn and walk away
What do you do when you need someone
But they just don't want to stay
What do you do when you believe someone
But their untrust you cannot sway
What do you do when you are serious for someone
And all they want to do is play
What do you do when you want to be close to someone
But they do everything to keep you at bay
What do you do when you love someone
But they don't believe a word you say

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~chubby-cheeks-10 Jul 26, 2006, 1:44:09 AM
wonderful! me likey the poem and the artwork! wow, you're great in airbrushing! :worship:

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*Ancient-one Jul 26, 2006, 2:45:27 AM
I would leave her and let her figure herself how much she'd love me. If she don't, then it's all clear for me and there's nothing I could do about it. But if she loves me, she would come back and let me know that she really do love me. Sometimes people just need some time to understand. And if we keep on holding them too tight they don't feel the necessarity to give something back in return. But if she sees that the one who loves her isn't there anymore, she maybe begins to realize how she really needs him. Because I think love is only serious if we can give our beloved one some air to breathe and to let her know what she really wants and that we thrust her, and not to stick on her like she's someone only there to stimulate our emotional pressures (sorry if that sounds a bit hard).
I think if loved ones see each other every single day, their love looses it's strenght and it becomes merely a dayly routine. Maybe that's because so much marriages fail.
That's just my opinion, I don't know if that would help anyone.

anyway, great artwork and the poem really asks a difficult question.

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»Restriction is a sin«
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~Sai-ya-ka Jul 26, 2006, 5:14:06 AM
wow, very very hard questions with all the counters.....i would simply just walk away too ^^;

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~mikey-madness Jul 26, 2006, 4:01:41 PM
LOl it isnt exactly airbrush, but I could not find where to put it

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~mikey-madness Jul 26, 2006, 4:02:56 PM
Thank you for such a detailed responce. It touches me when people think tha much into my work. Thank you so much.

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~mikey-madness Jul 26, 2006, 4:03:18 PM
If it was just that easy. If only it was.

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Look my gallery, leave a few words. I won't mind. I swear! :D :P :)

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~Sai-ya-ka Jul 26, 2006, 4:42:19 PM
ya, i know. sorry :hug:

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*rachelab74 Jul 27, 2006, 2:43:41 PM
I would cry, my heart would break, and then I would be stuck picking up the pieces as you let them go....and bloom into the being they were meant to be....
Lovely poem Mikey!! :hug:

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~deadlysickness Jul 28, 2006, 6:12:16 PM
mikey....man...woah...that touches me....deeply...it's ya girl jaz....wow....man....that makes me think of my ex but not really my ex cause we still have feelings for eachother and mess around....he's cheated on me for the.....third or more time now.....i can't take it that made me cry a little cause i can relate to that piece so fuckin well... i think my heart just broke....this is the last time....i can't take....mikey...I LOVE YOU!!!!
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all i ever wanted wasto love and be loved in return...even just a little
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~mikey-madness Aug 7, 2006, 4:51:03 AM
LOL thanks for the love. I try to touch my own heart and hope others follow suit. I put it out there to know that I am not alone. thanks.

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"Happiness is not in the mere possession of money; it lies in the joy of achievement, in the thrill of creative effort." ~Franklin Rooseve
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